Swing Bridge

WALT - use our senses and the 5 W’s when writing

Creak creak went the old shaggy destroyed bridge as Carman, Dad and I crossed the bridge but suddenly we heard a loud scream. We quickly ran back across the bridge but the bridge broke. Suddenly Dad remembered his axe and he cut down a tree and we quickly walked across the tree and ran home and had a big feast and went to bed and we never ever went back to the jungle again. Then in the morning we went to the park and had a picnic and in our picnic basket we had cake, bananas, apples and biscuits. We had a run around a big field and we all went home.